Reviews for Boy Next Door |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow...she's in trouble...hehe...updates... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Strange, but not bad. Quite simple. Things like:["Sup cutie. What you doin' boy?" "Nothin.' Thinking about you, sexy." "Yea sure." I giggled. "Meet any boys finer than me yet?" "Yup."] needs separating like: ["Sup cutie. What you doin' boy?""Nothin.' Thinking about you, sexy.""Yea sure." I giggled."Meet any boys finer than me yet?""Yup."] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, but I think you should change the names and not make it a fanfic...because I'm totally digging the story. Either way, I can't wait to read what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like its realy cool. update if you get a chance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can we say good? Damn girl u can rite! Not many B2K stories capture my attention that fast in one ch.! Keep going, i can't wait to see the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! But ya need to write more! People: We want more! We want more! |
![]() ![]() HEY. LOVE THIS STORY. IT'S GREAT. KEEP ON WRITNG. SIGNED: QUEEN_o A.K.A KING_O'S WIFEY |
![]() ![]() now finish it! |
![]() ![]() hey great story so far, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() great story. cant wait for more! which will hopefuly me soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I love this story! I hope you're still adding to this...well anyway, if possible, can you drop a review on mine? Thanks a lot and lotz a luv-Cherrie! |
![]() ![]() bangin' storee, cant wait for the next chapter... |