|Reviews for One Really Bad Day|
| Ani Hart chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
How the hell could you write something this pointless in reference to the greatest tragedy in recent US history?
Dude, seriously. if you're going to do something like this, WRITE IT DECENTLY!
First off, get a fucking grammar checker. Or a beta reader. Second of all, such a tragedy deserves more than token mentions in such a horribly-constructed story.
I can't... just...
A word of advice?
Stop writing. Forever.