Reviews for On My Own
Lounalune chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
Your poem is so real, it's amazing. It reminds me of myself ten years ago (yes, I remember my feelings when I was 5). Always living in dreams, in the stories I invented... U know that "On My Own" is the title of a song from the musical "Les Miserables"(actually, my favorite song of the musical). There is the same theme, living in a dream to escape reality, but it's treated really differently in a different context.
Losschris chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
Not bad, I like the short and too the point poems and this certainly does it. Good job. Well till next time. Losschris Out ~
not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
wow, i love it! great poem, really interesting meaning too, wonderful!
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
*seufz* Was soll man noch dazu sagen...du hast so ein Talent, ich LIEBE deine Gedichte! Alle so tiefsinnig und gehen ans Herz...*noch mal seufz* Hör niemals auf zu schreiben!

Das war ein stoffpferdischer Befehl!
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
Interesting- someone anxiously self-dependent, rejecting outside influences.

Like they've been hurt before- they question new things "What can you probably give me" and are very pessimistic "Except heartach and pain?"

The last half is a bit of an explanation, almost an apology or regret.

The last line is a bit confusing- the person seems stuck in their won mind- so dreams are more real than actual life.