Reviews for A Poem For Grampy
Lonewalker chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
sad... sorry about your grandfather. I did lose my step-grandfather about two years ago... sad thing is that we weren't that close.

good form of poetry though
Lady Light chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
Your poems are so beautiful yet they contain the sadness to move readers. The words flow together to give me knowledge that life is indeed important. * Lady Light
Coppelia- not logged in chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
My condolenses to you and your family. I know the whole deal with losing someone you care about, I wrote a poem once called "The Sun Was Just Rising". I hope you all get through this. C
The Princess of Light chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
*Sniff* That was so sad! I'm so sorry your Grampy died.*Sighs* Life can be so cruel sometimes.
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
Very sweet and heartbroken- can almsot feel the tears.

The last line of almsot all stanzas emphasise the bond shared- and adds to the soul-crushed feeling.
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