Reviews for Be There A Guardian? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() umm, are you going to finish this story? I really want to find out what happens and who you picked... |
![]() ![]() ![]() for more contentin thestory,i thinkyou should switch back and forth between the detention center and the palace. show that some actually do care about the prince,that the spell on the king is wearing off, perhaps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raspree/Ale3c |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raspree/Alec(am i being insistent enough? lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raspree/Alec |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raspree/Alec |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raspree/Alec!11and Xavier/and a Melinda that reveals she was just acting flighty and isnt really |
![]() ![]() ![]() aah so good! who does she end up with? D |
![]() ![]() Raspree/Alec Raspree/Alec Raspree/Alec Raspree/Alec Raspree/Alec Raspree/Alec ALL THE WAY... HELL YEA! but please please please no jealous fights... i think that xave should get his own lil woman... HELL YEA :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Respree/Alec! I don't like Xavier. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, i know you said it would take a little longer than expected, but seriously! i have been waiting for this update since last year on my birthday! what's taking so long? i'm sorry, but i'm terrible with being patient and i don't see how even i, the great procrastinator, could take a year to update! i know i'm coming off really rude and all, and i really didn't want to, but as i said before, i'm really impatient! so pleaase! update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kinda weird to review for chapter 20 on chapter 19, but it wouldn't let me cuz i already reviewed that chapter...anyway, i know you're trying to resolve everything, but (rude, i know) WHY ARE YOU TAKING SO LONG? you can't give a faithful reader *cough* not reviewer:( *cough* an author's note like that on their birthday! it's just depressing! i'm done complaining now, i'll just leave you alone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep on writing. You seem to have ground to a holt. You NEED to write more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's really good, but don't you think it's kinda short? i would definitely vote for Raspree/Alec. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story. The dialogue is a little confused at times but still quite amusing. I really like Xavier. Although, of course, Raspree is going to end up with Alec. Anyway, I'm surprised the next chapter is tha last one. There's still so much left to happen! Are you really going to be able to make her end up with Alec, have the three of them escape, have hwatever confrontation Xavier and Alec are going to have, AND fix the whole thing with Alec being in prince in one chapter. If you can, kudos to you. I don't think I could. Anyway, this is a good story and I look forward to the next chapter. |