Reviews for What's Worse
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
awesome
Nami98 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
that was FREAKIN AMAZING.

sounds exactly like a bad boy, great job
FakeASmile90 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This is great. I really liked it.
shortwinters219 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
freaking amazing!
Elesian chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
very powerful and very good
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Wow. This is absolutely brilliant. I love it. So realistic. So believable. So heart-wrenching. Bravo.
d666lisa chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
absolutely amazing piece of writing. you're a very talante author :-)
Luv and Peace chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
AMAZING! I had to read it over twice, I couldn't get over the strong, confident tone of the letter. You're an amazing writer! Hope to see some of your work soon!
A.A-H.L chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
Yo that kicked ass.
Punk Amaya chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
wow. that was pretty cool. -
Sifauna Auria chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
wow..this is..very..interesting and really cruel. the boyfriend is a hypocrite, reprimanding the father for hurting his daughter while he, himself, does the exactly the same thing..really good..)
Banana Nut Muffin chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
This is a very excellent piece of writing. I really liked it.
Alex-Blake chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
At first it sounds a bit like the boys boasting about his sexual experiences with this girl, but you skifully turned that round and produced a nice little piece there.

Something like this could be expanded on I suppose, but you got it just right with this use of langauge, very realistic, puts a lot of images in the mind and is very memorable.
Pika Pika chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Wow. I really liked this one, how aggressive and powerful the vioce is, it just makes you want more, even though you feel complete at the end. I only wish my guy thought like this one does. - Keep writing, you have great talent.
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