Reviews for What's Worse |
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![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was FREAKIN AMAZING. sounds exactly like a bad boy, great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great. I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() freaking amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very powerful and very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is absolutely brilliant. I love it. So realistic. So believable. So heart-wrenching. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely amazing piece of writing. you're a very talante author :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! I had to read it over twice, I couldn't get over the strong, confident tone of the letter. You're an amazing writer! Hope to see some of your work soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo that kicked ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. that was pretty cool. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow..this is..very..interesting and really cruel. the boyfriend is a hypocrite, reprimanding the father for hurting his daughter while he, himself, does the exactly the same thing..really good..) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very excellent piece of writing. I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At first it sounds a bit like the boys boasting about his sexual experiences with this girl, but you skifully turned that round and produced a nice little piece there. Something like this could be expanded on I suppose, but you got it just right with this use of langauge, very realistic, puts a lot of images in the mind and is very memorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I really liked this one, how aggressive and powerful the vioce is, it just makes you want more, even though you feel complete at the end. I only wish my guy thought like this one does. - Keep writing, you have great talent. |