Reviews for se songer
aintawoman chapter 1 . 10/8/2002
It's beautiful. honest. painful. good. true.

An abby poem, only from a different perspective.

To love one who will always love another. it hurts. alot.

Yeah, you don't know me. SOrry. I am one of Kai's friends in SC. Nice to meet you. heh.

"screamed in small red pain"

"i loved you." so simple. so cutting.

my heart hurts for you.
moonlightsonata chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
mysterious

Raman
unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
so coarse and floaty!

its like wood floating on slippery oil.

perhaps i cant explain it, but its

stifling and familiar

its like the murmuring sound of hail.

hail is so wonderful.

hail is also stifling, when your in hail the whole world is dancing and playing the drums.

it sounds so amazing.

kai
marlena chapter 1 . 9/17/2002
ach-

you know how i feel about reviews...

but this poem is beyond wonderful, dreamy and french and sad and real and perfect. wonderful