Reviews for Perfidy Market
Star5 chapter 1 . 9/18/2002
brilliant - my words wouldn't quite give it fair praise, they're far too plain.. and i have no criticism whatsoever.
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 9/18/2002
I like the theme - I've always wanted to write a market poem. Just such an interesting place. You can find some pretty strange fruits n' veggies there...
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/18/2002
I like this one. The ending was just so perfect and once again your imagery was faultless!

Jade
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/17/2002
Interesting imagery that really put it on two levels. Could've put more spin on it like,

"old men positively flock about-"

or

"What fun we are standing by the fresh fruit"

That was cool.

Very enjoyable poem, as always.

-Kirney