Very interesting and picuresque. I find that a lot of your works are like this. Like I said before, you have a very unique writing style. Unique in a good way. ::smile:: Very impressed.

this just has a wonderful flow, a feeling of renewal.

I really liked that! I loved the format that you used, I think that made the poem absolutly incredible.

Job!

Hey it would be cool if people would write reviews that are more than one word, no offense to those who do.

cool