Reviews for two poems
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
Very powerful. My favorite line was:

Life consists of a series

Of meaningless boundaries

The whole image you develope after those lines was brilliant but those one stood out for me. Take Care

Jade
waterlilypad chapter 1 . 9/19/2002
Yay! You broke them apart! Thank you- I love them all. Hope I'll see more like these.