|Reviews for Tainted Friendship|
| QueenOfTheUniverse chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
wow! That's some story! I think, with a little work, this would make an awesome story/novel! This should, I think, be much longer, in length, as well as within the story. What I mean is that everything happens a bit too quickly. Also, I would think, Squee would be a lot more shocked and sad over his friends deaths. And after that long a time, would his hair still be blue? I also want to know more of what happened. Who killed everyone? What happened to Squee for so long? Anyway, keep working on this, and it'll be be even better!
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 3/23/2003
whoa! dyslexia strikes again!got a few missing words there..not that im one to talk but whoa i thought i was reading oneof my own stories there..not just from the mistakes but the over all wierdness as well. it may need a bit of reworking but i think it a pretty good start to a sick and twisted tale
Death is beauty
~Nat The Unchanging Darkness~
| SS2 female Gohan chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
EEEEEWWWWWWWWW! That was really nasty SAK! Was there like, restrictions on what you had to write? I guess if you like the stuff, it was well written, I just don't happen to like that stuff.
| Dark Shaedow chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
Hey Sarr! The fic is good, but... you need to make transitions like when Kylie told Squee the others were dead, make it a biy more, ah, subtle. Got to go, Mrs. Chester says to log off the laptop. Bye!