Reviews for St Louis
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/24/2002
Enjoyed that one. But jeez, it's like you're packing so much into these. You coulda stuck the St. Louis Drugged/murderd/narcotics buissness, instead of making all the references to collage.

The "at a bar- / getting most gloriously drund / but the campus..." was a good transition, but there still is a lot.

Maybe that's your point, in which case, I'll shut up soon.

Excellently written, a pleasure as always...

-kirney
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
Genuine. I can imagine it... What would an attendee think?
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
You delve into such original avenues of poetry that I am constantly left in awe of you work! You have a very deep soul.

Jade
Star5 chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
i loved the ending.. just beautiful and made me think..