I'm honestly bawling here... I can't say how fucking much Otori's end caught me off-guard. I'm probably going to end up rambling here and with lots of typos, my vision is clouded by tears...

It was a good one. I loved Otori and Itto together (minus the ending, ugh, I would have personally tortured that man who called himself their "father" to death. F*cking coward...) and the way their feelings for each other were shown.

Heck, I thought at some point it would turn out to be a three-way thing (you know, Otori's suspicions that Yuki was bi and the way he acted around Itto maybe something would blossom. Me and my mind).

All in all, I liked it very much. Now excuse me while I go dry my tears of blood.

i cried at the beginning and now i laugh my as off as i read how they scare that "poor" girl.
i really like this story and i hope it stays that way ;)

I'm crying... *messes up computer with so many tears*

Aww come on! why does he have to die! ;(
change it CHANGE IT : :

Hehe I like the point of view person right now lol

So beautiful, but so tragic!

:'(

goddam! thats depressing!

That was adorable but the end made me cry :'(

I loved that :)

oh soo good, but im still sad that otori died. im silently crying.

oh my tacos...tht was good! and sad! You did a good job!

so sad! Very well-written, actual plot, pretty realistic if you ask me. I'm still crying cause Otori died *sniff*

Oh, how I love this gem! How I hate that Otori died, I mean, how can't I? But still, the ending is amazing...

Your writing seems to put me in a trance, like if I'm under a spell... But maybe that's just me being sick... :/

:)

omgah! i can't believe "he" was the one that died!

gah that was friggin sad!

but i loved it!

I really liked this story a lot ]

sad ending tho... [

*sniff* that was a very sad ending. me ish very sad. *sniff, *sniff*