oh my god. This was a great story. But I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED HIM. ITTO AND OTORI WERE SUPPOSE TO LIVE THEIR DREAMS, SURVIVE AND LOVE EACH OTHER 4EVER. WHY DID YOU KILL HIM. IT JUST CRUSHED MY HEART. I HATE THINGS WHEN THEY END THIS WAY. NOW A LONE TEAR IS FALLING FROM MY FACE. WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE (cries)

I can't believe you killed him. i will not get over this! you must rbing him back to life somehow! or . . . write a NEW story where itto realizes he's madly in luv with yuki and they get together and . . . bleh. or, about how he comes back to life and they make MORE of their relationship. (okay, I'm crazy, I've fallen in love with a gay charactor in a book . . . I need some asprin . . .)

This was sad, yet sweet. Loved this story a lot! I'm sad it ended like this, but it was so beautiful! The plot, the way you wrote it! It was perfect!

And good luck, if I'm not too late:3

- Elyon!

This is so sad. I'm used to reading happy endings but I guess I need a change once in awhile.. Well written!

That was a really good story. and you say that you cant do it. 'eck, if i was as talented as you i wouldn't stop writing them. oh well.. i dont run your life. But please keep up your creativity! thanks for the entertaining, yet sort of sad, story!

-Takara, aka Lacey, aka Hey YOU!

You have such talent in writing pretty, angsty, heart-wrenching stories! I really hope you'll write more will all come out as lovely as Forever Mine did! The ending is really 'RE A TOTALLY AWESOME WRITER!

Hope your exams results come out great! Of course, for geniuses who spin wonderful stories, what else? *holds up big "KIRA ROCKS!" sign* Good luck!

I am in tears! I can't believe he died! I mean - I KNEW you were going to kill him, but I'm still shocked and upset! . . . I hate you!

Don't stop writing slash! And it's okay Otori is dead because . . . NOW he is happy - but without Itto -

*breaks in a sob* Never mind!

Great Story, I really liked it.

*gasp* he got shot? goodness! two are cute together! - You should get Yuki in on the action. _~ hee hee. lovely story. :D update again soon!

~cries~

That can't be. It was all so great.

Nu

;- Mizery Rose

This is a very good story, and I look forward to the epilogue. I love how you incorporated X Japan lyrics into the chapter - 'Crucify My Love' is such a beautiful song.

The ending of this was so... sad... this CAN'T be the final chapter! I loved each part of this story as much as the part before it, so don't you go and flame yourself!

*sadly* He isn't dead, is he? I know- shot twice at point-blank range...but you're the author...I demand a happy ending, and surely the angst requirement has been fulfilled? He was so happy...:(

Noooo! if you either stop now or kill Otori then... then... then I cry! This is sooo sad! He's not gonna die, he's not gonna die *chants* *cries*

Anyway, this story is truly one of the best storied ever! I beautifully written the plot's great and the chapter length are perfect.

- Elyon!

PS writers blocks suckXD

I came on, not really expecting you to have a new chapter up, and then I saw that you DID! I was like - hurrah! I was going to kill myself - but then I read it and thought 'never mind'! You CAN'T kill Otori! No! Not when he's just now with Itto and everything is going good! If he dies I'll go on a rampage and kick everything! Starting with your left leg!

How can he die? Itto loves him (right?) too much for him to die!

Update soon - before I start kicking people ...