AH! Your fic is good, I dun really read incest but yours is really good. Keep it up!

Hey, great story. I thought it was very well done, and the lemony bits very tastefully and gracefully skimmed over. Not too hot and heavy (like chilli) but very well done nevertheless. Please hurry and update!

This story kicks ass! It's one of the very best works I've read in months! THANK YOU!

~drool~

I've been following this story for a while, and I must say I absolutely adore it. I could feel pretty much exactly what the narrator boy is going through with his father and his brother, as I have similar things going on in my life. Minus the incest.

Anyways, its a great great story, and I can't wait to see what you do to it next. Also, if you get a chance, maybe you can read some of my stuff. I've mostly got poems, but I'm starting on an Original fic.

Doumo arigatou gozaimasu!

~bows and runs off~

-Mizery Rose

This is one of the best stories I have ever read!

Write MORE! You have got to keep this updated or I'll just DIE!

*Reapeats herself*

DIE!

I really like this story. I usually don't like present tense, but that's because lots of people switch to past in the middle of sentances. You did a great job with that. I'm impressed. This is such a cute story! Please write more soon!

OMG, I simply LOVED this! some parts of it made me cry! It's just so beautifully written and I love the plot! PLEASE continue very soon! I love it!

As before, i am really enjoying your story. This was a good chapter. I can not wait for the next. so update. I hope you had a merry christmas and a happy New Year! And please update! was the fact that he found the girl attractive important at all...i dont know why but it just stuck out to me...anyway...Love the story

-Lacey, aka Takara

I daren't venture any further on this, i'm afraid of smut. but yes, your story IS...er...interesting. Interesting in a good way. Definitely good-interesting. HONESTLY! style of 1st person narrative. Oh go on, write, you've got 16 other reviewers begging for more.

Millikov

I am spiffy-cool

Go me!

Tolkien's World is Magic. And I love it.

Okay, maybe two brothers making love is a little...well, you know. But nonetheless, it's a great story and I really like how it's going so far. Did you add the part about his dad raping him after you finished the chapter? Cuz I didn't remember reading it but maybe I skipped over it...

Really good so far! Your doing a great job. Its an interesting story and entertaining, and here I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part!

you're doing fine dar...

i hate to admit it but i'm actually enjoying this particularly yaoi incesty fic of yours...and you know how much i actually disapproove of such things...but i wanna say that you'd better not keep me waiting too long or you are going to get it from me...after all i know where you live...so you better heed the warning!

cherio!

luv,

Knanaki

O.o Yuki has a brother did indeed pop into mind. _ That was a lovely little lemon there, I quite enjoyed it. I hope you get the next part out soon and I hereby lay all blame for my current incestious yaoi obsession at your feet. _~

i absolutly loved it. if you ever write more please send them to me or something. it was great.

GREAT FIC! well written! Keep up the good work