what? damn writers block! just as it was getting really good. grawr on you!

hahaha. still a good chapter to me.

i is happy for the lemon. yaoi is good for meh! haha. well, if my mind is starting to catch your drift, im guessing that yuki's brother is going to come into the picture. more incest?

i can understand his fear. i mean, its only been about two weeks...or something like that since he was raped. time is of the essence. X3

ill be sure to keep that in mind. sukebe. haha!

hm, i feel bad for otori but i think its better that Itto knows about it now. X3

*hugs otori*

er...wait, crap. *backs away*

its a good thing that i watched those anime's on youtube. otherwise i would have been so lost as to what you were talking about. X3

this creates a good starter picture for your story. i like it! X3

meow!

Okay, i am sorry what type of brother allows the sibling to be beaten by their father. I don't care if your being nice to him, that doesn't make up for it. Update this soon!

Reading sad story's when your bored at work is probably not the best idea... Everyone was like is the receptionist crying?...

Anyways I really liked this, though it really sucks that he died...

i was crying at the end when it was itto's voice, so don't you say it's not well-written - rubbish does NOT make me cry! i wanted otori to live but it would have been difficult i guess. loved it anyway

it had me a little confused

but i get it now

so it's all good

hope to get more smex though

but it's still good without it

omg... that sex scene was so fucking hot

but, the second i saw 'love canal'

you killed it

it died

no

bad

That was the best story ever! I mean..Incest isn'y my favorite subject, but the way you wrote it just made it seem.. I don't know, right. Well I am sure you have gotten many fan mail but I hope you can appreciate my admiration.