Well. That just sucks all ass. (and this is coming from a person that loves killing people off in her stories.)

That was amazingly written.

I normally don't enjoy first person stories. They always get on my nerves and I purposely avoid them.

I'm really really thankful that I read this. This is one of the best stories I have read in a while.

Fantastic job!

I'll check out your other works.

OMG, I loved the story. It was sad to know that he died. I can't believe you killed him, I actually thought he would somehow survive and when I started reading this chapter, I thought it was Otori's point of view until I realized it was Itto's. Like I said, I love the story.

it was good but it felt a little abrupt. might not want to hear that, but i think if you stretched out the thought of his father maybe killing his son, would've been better i think. stil good.

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Oh my god... you killed him! and.. now im all teary :(

i thought your story was so moving. i just don't like the ending. Otori was my favorite character and he died.i cried so much at the end. i prefer for the story to end at chapter nine right after they had and him were such a good couple and im one for happy endings. all in all it was good, especially the sex for writing for life.

Wow... Killing off Otori was really unexpected... I'm just speechless right now...

That was a great story. I read it all in one day. Didn't even take a break. I finished it last night, but I didn't submit a review then because I was too tired.

By the way, you're really good at writing lemons.

I really enjoyed reading this. It's a shame you won't be writing anything like it again.

My favorite thing about your fic was how you connected the first paragraph of the prologue to the last paragraph of the epilogue.

Another thing I really enjoyed realizing was that you showed that life can end in an INSTANT. You wouldn't even comprehend what was happening until it was over. They were talking and laughing, joking about what they were going to do later, and BANG, life is gone.

Even though I didn't want him to die, I wanted them to live happily ever after, I think the sadness gave a lasting effect. I give you kudos for such a wonderful fic.

o jeez that was sad...

A very sad ending to a beautiful story.

Oh my god, wow, that Aww..Poor kid, I feel so bad for him, And I cried - Aww! amazing writing wow, just beautiful.

OMG I cried as I read the last part and I commend you on your skills!

Okay... I do believe this is my first time ver to actually sob over a story. I still am actually... I read the last paragraph, spun around in my chair, hugged my knees, and cried. This is truly an amazing story.

I greatly enjoyed your story but frankly the ending confused me... could you please enlighten me thank you ever so much

Kiri

I don't think ur last chapter was lazy. I thought it was pretty, and it would have been kinda lame if he'd been shot twice and lived. I almost cried...ALMOST! That's prolly just cuz I'm a sap...

Beautiful. I absolutely loved it.