I hated the end...no I didn't hate the end, I just hated the feeling it gave me. It was a great story and I nearly cried. At first, I was a little freaked by the fact that they were brothers, but I forced myself to be openminded and in the end, I loved it. I wish the ending were different, but not every story is going to have a happy ending. Beautifully written.

You killed him! I will hate you now, you let the bad guy win, I hate it...no!

I KNEW there was going to be a TWIST!

*cries*

I just love twists, makes my heart wrench and its unforgettable.

*cheesy*

Anyways, beautiful job! )

Wow...very very good...You have me in tears. I love it...

*Cries* That was so sad! Awesome story though. .~

Oh Gods! This is such an amazing story! So touching! I'm still crying from the end! Ir's so bittersweet. Amazing. Beautifull. You have a true gift.

Damn, he dies? Aye, I loved this... if it isn't already on my favorites list, it is now lol. *sobs*

OMG. I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU KILLED OTORI! HOW COULD YOU? WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY? COULDN'T YOU HAVE LIKE... YOU KNOW MADE THE READERS THINK FOR A SECOND THAT HE WAS GOING TO DIE THEN BY SOME MIRACLE HE LIVES? REVISE! REVISE THE END! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.. COME ON! i feel so sad right now... during this story i actually thought there was true love out there.. but noo. you crush my hopes by killing the main character! *SOBS UNCONTROLLABLY*

that aside. the story was AWESOME! uhm. excuse my immediate mood swings... i think i have split personalities? but anyway. the story was well written ... even the ending even if it wasn't what i wanted or was expecting... but great job anyway...

this fic was really good. i love the relationship between otori and itto... they're so sweet together. "But this is different. It isn't the same, Otori. When I fool around with those girls, I have sex with them. But you're special. With you... I make love. Understand?" i LOVE when he said that... so caring and understanding big brother itto is! haha and i find yuki such a hilarious guy... LOL

uhm. about the ending... well it's not that i don't particularly like it. it was very good... but the fact that itto didn't end up with otori after all they've gone through kind of disappointed me... i wished you could've made him alive and with itto or something like that... not dead. but it was okay.

over all the story was great ) such hot and sweet boys. HAHA amazing job.

That was such a great story and the ending is really sad i actually was crying...I can't wait to read more of your work...Great job

WA! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED HIM!here I am looking for a good Yaoi story to read, and I rad this one all the way through in one hour just for the poor guy to DIE AT THE END! *Cries* Not one single fictionpress story has ever made me cry! Why'd he have to die? I'm so sad! I don't think I've ever cried so much for a story (at least one like this)... Great story, I love you, even though that was the biggest heart-breaker ever! -Everlasting fan of Otori, Kini Takohashi-

i've already read this all the way through and reviewed and what not, but i'm reading it again becuase it's so well written and absolutely wonderful. it made me laugh when Otori said "love canal". heh, sorry, just had to comment on that.

I lie this beginning, and I am excited to know that the story is completed, and I will read it-poor Otori...

if you write this good as an angst chapter u would do wonderfully with a fluffy chapter..reading this makes me believe that your writing will be beautiful whether its happy or with your writing. ~*Claire*~

ah! you killed him! you killed him! noo0o! this was a great fic..but did you have to kill hinm ! Oh well ...it was great anyway ...