Reviews for Forever Mine
vampyreice chapter 10 . 4/8/2004
I loved your story yet I hated it because it made me cry. I found it very interesting and well written but I didn't like the ending though - it was really sad. You have written the story excellently and I wish you luck for you're future work.
Jasie Eccentricity chapter 10 . 3/1/2004
I'm crying over a story... damn... lol that story is one of the best i've read on here... you HAVE to write more slash... lol you are good at it... umm yea... good story... but can't Yuki and Itto ever get together... lol
Soul chapter 10 . 12/9/2003
ah thats freckin sad! but that was real good, i like it alot! Ur a god damn great author!
MusumeMarron chapter 10 . 9/29/2003
This is so my favorite story so far! I love it! :-) Great work!

Anata no Marron
Naatz chapter 10 . 9/20/2003
I . . . can't believe you killed him, had him killed . . . It's . . . my God . . .

Your writing is absolutely terrific. The feelings I had when I read it were so intense, it drew me insane. I started reading it once before, but lost the link, and only yesterday night rediscovered the story. I tried going to sleep, I honestly did, I was already in bed even, but I had to finish the last chapter and the epilogue, so I got up . . .

Then I wandered around the apartment for awhile, put on a CD in the stereo and put a song on Repeat. I believe I do cried myself to sleep.

It was wonderful, how you made us all think it was going to be ALL RIGHT. That they were going to be HAPPY . . .

Your story is one of the best and strongest stories I've ever read. Thank you.
FamousOneLiners chapter 10 . 9/11/2003
how sweet!

and orignal and very well ritten

love the slash!
waltz4themoon sakura-sama chapter 10 . 8/25/2003
You are a very talented writer! As my friend Mei and I sat here, reading your whole story through, it was very well composed. THE ENDING SUCKED! It was terrible, how Otori died! We were tearing, and shaking. _

Although, it probably would be better with that ending, not expecting it and all... no happily ever after! _~

mecha kokkoii!

ichi ichi ichi ban!
firess chapter 10 . 7/21/2003
aww thats so sad...good one though
Onyrion chapter 10 . 7/20/2003
This is a super good fic, I read from start to finish in one shot! Simply great! Though Otori dies, but still it's really well writen. I really loved it, congrats.
okinawa baby chapter 10 . 6/27/2003
omg! the end made me start cryin! *tears* it was 1:28 in the morning when i finished it and started crying casuing my mom to came ! AH! Otori is dead..no...*tears*
jess chapter 10 . 6/25/2003
GOOD STORY hated when he died though really good
newtypeshadow chapter 10 . 6/24/2003
:fumes: i -knew- i shouldn't have read this. i -saw- the angst label! but i started it, and i just couldn't stop.

i could -kill- you for killing otori. granted, their father would always have caused problems, but...:sniffle: OTORI. did it have to be HIM? (why did it have to be ANYBODY?)

if you didn't write half as well as you do, i wouldn't be so upset. but the fact is i really like your characters, and your storyline, and the way you wrote the romance between itto and otori, and the way you write -period,- and a zillion other things...

and you killed otori. -_-

great fic though. _ glad i read it.
daddy's-girl2005 chapter 10 . 5/22/2003
thats so sad how could u kill him gr
daddy's-girl2005 chapter 6 . 5/22/2003
damn parents for walking in and there is abslutly nothing wrong with being in love with yaoi its a wonderful wonderful thing
ras chapter 10 . 5/13/2003
Otori died 0.0

wah! (but still a good story. even though he died... wah!) wah...
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