Reviews for You Chose to Linger
woundedmaiden chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Oh my gosh. I really don't know what to say. It...it gave me images of mostly fall. I love it. It makes me want to write a lot. In fact I think I will. Wow. This is going on my favorite stories list. And you, onto my authors list now! I can't believe this poem. I want to read it constantly...
tarienelle chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
great. its really.. haunting and drifty. drifty? eh. is that even a word? oh well.. its great. like the ending. it cuts off with no questions. yep. really great. keep it up. )
CaitSpain chapter 1 . 11/2/2002
I really like this. It's an interesting speculation on what a person does after death. I especially liked the last stanza. It added a nice finish to the whole thing. :)
JazzPizza chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
Haunting and beautiful. The cadence and the rhyming pattern both work quit well.

Good job.
Dartxni chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
Wow, I this is alot. ITs a really good poem.

plug... Read my poem October Fantasies, you might like it.
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
shibby poem! nice, and sweet flow