|Reviews for Yesterday|
| Makaila chapter 1 . 10/26/2000
That's good! I liked it! :
| Ken Johnson chapter 1 . 10/26/2000
Good song, Lys. Do you have music for it?
I think "Yesterday" has been done so why not call it "Things Change" or something to reflect it's originality.
This is my first visit to this site and I must say that most of the stuff is cliche ridden and derivative. You seem to have a voice, 'though. I will look forward to reading more of your work.
I hear a pragmatic realist reflecting philosophocally on life and then deciding he/she doesn't need to accept what life throws at them and ends very optimistically trying to recreate yesterday. (I don't think he/she will succeed, myself, but that - very sensibly - is left to the listner)
A thoughtful and interesting song.
| digitally obsessed chapter 1 . 10/25/2000
wow... this is so cool lys... damn i love your poetry... and is leina giving up dai! MUAH! LESS COMPETITION FOR ME! I WILL WIN! MUAH! and wow... i so am gonna get soapy water... ~~kate~~
| Reena chapter 1 . 10/24/2000
YAY! (simple, to the point _ )