Reviews for Sleeping
Allyson chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
You are a fabulous writer, and must have an amazing imagination to write such awesome stuff! You ROCK!
Raining Star chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
beautiful and sad, but not quite bitter(yet?) i love it. completely awesome.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
Another great poem. So true. I sometimes wish I could 'just keep on sleeping' when I'm faced with something I don't understand or have no right answer for because either answer would hurt some one I care about.

I'd appreciate it if you took a look at my poems and dropped in a commet. If you don't it doesn't matter.

Keep on writing,

Barbara Dupre chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
I like this poem...The rhyme scheme seems to imply that there is no 'rhyme or reason' to why things happen, and that one person's voice seems small when compared to the face of something they can't understand. I have some poetry too, along with some other junk, so if you wanted to see, I'd be happy. In the meantime, keep up the great work!
Aathiya Lia chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
You know, the reason people don't (dare to) review your poetry is probably because there isn't enough words in the known languages that could say how incredible your works are. So there :)