|Reviews for At Last|
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 27 . 6/12/2007
Wow. This chapter was powerfully written. It almost makes you want to be mad at Sy, but when it's explained like that, you really can't.
Great job! I'm sad that there will be no Sy Brooke relationship but I guess I understand.
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 26 . 6/12/2007
AH! NO! Why? That sucks so bad! The accident and him calling her Rachel and EVERYTHING. UGH! and things were going so well and it was so cute and everything! this sucks
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 25 . 6/12/2007
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 24 . 6/12/2007
AW! I'm so glad they're together! It's so cute!
Poor James. He seriously fucked up.
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 23 . 6/12/2007
Great. Absolutely great
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 22 . 6/12/2007
Greatness. Pure greatness.
I'm glad James walked away in the end. I don't think it would have sat well with anyone if him and Hugh got into a fight.
And I loved Ty's overprotectiveness. Kinda reminds me of my older brothers
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 21 . 6/12/2007
That is definitely my new favorite word. Cojones. I LOVE it!
It's funny how smart Hugh is to use Brooke and Rachel for his gain. I never thought he had it in him, but apparently he does. I'm glad Brooke set him straight in the end
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 20 . 6/12/2007
Ahh, the more I know about Sy the less I want Brooke and James to get together and the more I want B and Sy to get together. The man is just TOO SEXY!
Great chapter! I really loved it
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 19 . 6/12/2007
AH! the ENDING! oh my gosh! The intensity is amazing! i really just want to press that sweet little button and go to the next chapter, but I had to review this chap.
VERY well written! I think you did well describing the game since I could follow it and I know absolutely nothing about basketball except get the ball in the hoop. Great job!
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 18 . 6/11/2007
" “Cuz, man... you, Sy, every day.” He grinned. “That shit’d be better than Days of Our Lives.”" AHAHAHAHA. Oh man, that is the greatest line! I love it!
Nice ending. Not as great as the others, but still nice.
Poor Brooke, with Sy messing with her and her all concerned over her stupid bitch of a sister. That really sucks. great chapter
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 17 . 6/11/2007
[middle of chapter review]
oh man. so much drama. so much info to process. that marking thing? kinda sexy in it's own way, but not... yeah. it was interesting, cool.
So I'm guessing the S on Sy's chest was for Sky or something? So many questions answered, still so many to go...
Oh, and the whole rap music incident cleared up all my confusion about the race thing.
Great ending! As usual :)
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 16 . 6/11/2007
I loved it!
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 15 . 6/11/2007
Very very cute. Rachel's still a bitch. Hugh is being brainwashed. James is becoming sweet. I really hope Ci and Aaron become an item and that's all for now!
| oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE chapter 28 . 6/11/2007
oh me god... AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH
i cant believe that hugh did that! well yes i can, he's EVIL! but i mean that was unnecessary. i also cant believe what brooke and james said during their argument(i refuse to call it sommething else because if i do i think they might nor end up together and we cant have that now can we.) but im glad that they sorta forgace each other. i hope they get together bu not too soon because then the story might end and i dont want it to end soon. good chapter. i hate and at the same time love the sort of cliff hanger you left. it is and at the same time it isn't a cliff hanger. yeah i know im confuzzled by my own statement too. now how sad is that :)
well as long as it doesn't take 3 more months like some of the stories that i'm reading for you to update than its fine. some authors take one or two weeks to update and others take like a month.
well if your alive after you read this you have my blessings because you are officially an immortal being. lol :D well dont die while reading this. cant wait for more :)
| RhythmOfMySoul chapter 14 . 6/11/2007
Great chapter! I really like who Aaron picked Brooke to go on a date with.
That sucks what Skylar did. She's such a bitch. Brooke should get the whole school against her. that would be interesting.