Reviews for At Last |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your endings. They're just perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I love the ending! It'd be hilarious if they woke up wrapped up in each other's arms or something. I'm glad Brooke is fitting in nicely with the team! This development is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greatness! I love how Brooke got a new friend. I can't beleive James said the one thing that would hurt Brooke. I mean, he can say anything he wants, but talking about her sister. That sucks a LOT. I hate it when I'm compared to my sibling |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello you! another update, sweet! i wonder if her majesty will break down and tell brooke sorry for blaiming her twins death on brooke? so will you? as for this chapter, i am very glad that you did not make brooke hate james. yes james was partwise a jerk but hey he just wanted her back. and pictures, well i have no prob. using my own fatasy for pictures, hehe. take care hun, until next update. and by the way i said it before but i like this story, good writing, language, the interaction. and also, the tempo of the story is perfect, it is all being revealed, but in its own time, not to fast or rushed and not to slow either. /sandra |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! What a cute ending! I loved it! That was great what Brooke did in response to the guys stealing her clothes. It was absolutely ingenious! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! It's nice knowing names, namely the name of Brooke's ex, and a little bit more about him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol... at the same time if you updared really quickly then i'd run out of reading material really quickly... lose-lose situation ain't it? Þ great chapter.. though i have deja vu bout the first part where jae storms in? . |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm that was an interesting chapter quite eventful really. emotions flying - its beautiful in a very weird way. but i liked it and i hope inspiration for the next chapter comes to you ) izzie |
![]() ![]() YAY! update! I did like the chapter, it wasnt boring, i actually got nervous when Hugh went to talk to Brooke and i was like shitt, lol but they'll be ok. And I hope you get inspired real soon for the next chapter, REAL soon, this is still one of my FAV stories, LOVE it, and i just love james hahaha Loved the chapter Michelle |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! OH MY GOD! these last two chapters were... there are no words to describe. they were awsome,sad,touching... i totally loved them this story is very very very very( i think you get my point) good. i hope you update soon cant wait for more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT GREAT GREAT chapter! I loved it! the truth or dare was AMAZING! Skylar is kinda scary, especially with the whole personality change thing. kinda freaky. Brooke's outfit to the party was cute. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. A new character, great! I loved what Brooke did to Hugh in the library. Very well written! Just wondering, why are there like, random black people. I mean, in the club you can tell the guys dancing with Brooke are black because of the way you made them speak. I know that a couple chapters back the way Jae spoke made her seem black also...what's up with that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, that's crucial. I absolutely love what Brooke did to the guy in detention. Great chapter! So how DID he know where Brooke's house was? Did he use to like her sister or something? Anyway, this chapter was amazingly written full of great action! I love how there had to be 3 football players getting brooke off of James. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm loving the introduction of new characters. hmm, I wonder what happened between Jae and mystery boy. |