Reviews for At Last
aliaschantra chapter 36 . 12/2/2010
My comment for chap37 got cut off. So here I go again. I’m a new reader by the way.

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Sh*t! Sorry.

"Still no word from Brooke and he still hadn't made it to funny yet. " This sentence is so sad, it says a lot. I feel so bad for James.

I hate Brooke right now. Although I probably should reserve judgment until I hear what she has to say before hating but that’s just how I feel, for the moment anyway. What was D’Ange talking about? James and Her Majesty? I should probably read from the start.
aliaschantra chapter 37 . 12/2/2010
Sh*t! Sorry.

"Still no word from Brooke and he still hadn't made it to funny yet. "
cherrypiesizzle chapter 36 . 11/27/2010
Are you SURE James didn't date her Highness before? Hm...there's something fishy still...things are going too well
cherrypiesizzle chapter 35 . 11/21/2010
LOL! James is so sweet, and if I may say it, he is totally the girl in the relationship. It's completely cute. He gets anxious, he worries over things neurotically, tries to do things dutifully, and he cooks! I need someone like him
ghurl00 chapter 36 . 11/18/2010
Yay for the update. I like how she didn't hold back anymore! Good for her!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 36 . 11/18/2010
Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
tinechris chapter 36 . 11/17/2010
so excited now, thanks a millie for the update :)
Courtney-chan chapter 36 . 11/15/2010
Hey sugah!

I'm glad this is getting more of your attention, and I like the direction it's taking. Brooke is growing, which is awesome. Kudos to you.
ess3sandra chapter 36 . 11/13/2010
when will he swhowdown with her sister occur?
crimsonangel21 chapter 36 . 11/13/2010
Still a massive James fan :)
mykes chapter 3 . 10/15/2010
I like it, I really do. But the characterisation just seems too dodgy to me. At one point you have Brooke as this confident girl who doesn't care what anyone thinks and the next you have her blushing and giving tentative smiles. You also give her a rebellious streak here and there then BOOM! She's mega bitch. The next second she openly flirting with a big grin on her face and suddenly she's slapping people and pouring drinks over their heads.

I like it though. I'm confused when it comes to Brooke though.
t chapter 23 . 9/28/2010
honestly this seems like a good story but girl you have to improve your writing quite a bit.

first i think its very inconsistent how brooke changes how she speaks when shes with ty or sy or when she's with james. i understand that sometimes friends talk differently but she seems like a whole different person. this actually stems from another problem you havent established your characters quite well. i mean brooke might just as well die and no one will really notice.

also improve on your pronoun use. sometimes you'll use he and the he will shift from hugh to james to sy. its so confusing.

honestly the story idea is quite good. but you sort of need to improve your execution. hope i helped
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 35 . 8/28/2010
Absolutely amazing story! I love every bit of it!
krazycutiechic chapter 35 . 8/4/2010
another update! wo!

im seriously worried james used to date rachel and hes gonna mess it al up. lol, crap. Lovely that you're updating! lol love it!

Keep it up!
ghurl00 chapter 35 . 7/31/2010
Sy and Brook's relationship is kind of cool.:)
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