Reviews for At Last |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am seriously in love with this story. I'm totally captivated by everything and the weird thing is that even though I don't always like Brooke, I totally get where she's coming from. This chapter is my favorite one so far. The whole Hugh and romance book thing threw me for a loop, but it's all cool. Just wondering, are we going to hear more about him? (oh yeah and keep up the good work :D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() me likee, although I tend to forget who's who after awhile and after reading a lot of different stories. Update sooner please! |
![]() ![]() wow, a chapter? hahaha, shocking! well im glad u havetn totally forgotten about this. lol, i liked it, I really did. Brooke and him finally getting somewhere. woo! Hope they don't eff it up...but I'm sure they will hahaha thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy they're together for real. James deserved as much!XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() So i started this story at 11 and didnt stop reading until it weas time for me to get ready for my college class. From there i was reading it on my iphone in the car, and the second i got access to a computer, i finished it. I know i shouldve commented on the other chapters, but that wouldve taken time away from reading the next one. (: I absolutely adored this story, and i will continute to reread it until i die. (Hopefully.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter, although the wait was a bit long-lol. well worth the wait, kind of, with its content. im still here though, ready to continue reading this story because i cant wait to find out what happens between Brooke and James. they have danced around each other for so long, im glad she is finally opening up to him and trying to be with him, although we know rachel/skye is going to get in the way somehow, gr! Well, anyway, great chapter, and please try not to take so long next time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... long long LONG time no see. This is still a pretty fuckawesome story here, and I was always a fan of James and Brooke... Sy can go suck a bag of cocks in my mind. My question now is... what the hell happened to Brooke that made her so scared of Skye/Rachel? Or maybe more accurate, what happened to Skye that makes her hate Brooke so much that she wants to take everything Brooke holds near and dear to her heart? And 2nd question, how does James not realize that she's scared of losing him? Hence her hesitance in dating for real... I hope they all will be revealed in time, I haven't been getting alerts for this, but I reread it all today, and I was reminded of the goodness. Hope to see more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to said I've short term memory so I like don't even remember this story at all. :) I read it anyway and it was really good. -Now its his term to break her heart ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to study right now but I just wanted to say you don't suck :) And I'm gonna read this as soon as I have time (see, it's understandable to have a life :D, you must write only if it feels right ) Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() firstly, YAY for an update! I knew you had it in you :DD secondly, YAY this is the first time I've got a reply ON the actual page :DD and I was first on the list. Not that it means much, but still. coolio :DD thirdly, YAY for an update again, even if I did have to go back and re-read the last chapter cause I totally forgot what happened in it. kudos to you. keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updates! *beams* I was kind of doubting this story would be updated since it hasn't been for 2 years, but so happy u did. Unfinshed stories always disappoint me. :( I can just imagine the characters alive in their own little fictitious world left hanging. Anyways you wrote well even without going over it much. Update again soon? |
![]() ![]() Ok, if Brooke screws this up/breaks James' heart to get back w/Sy, I will hate her a little bit. I obviously dunno your plans for who she ends up with (especially since I havent read the rest of the story in so long. If I remember correctly, though, shes hung up on Sy and seems like she'll drop James at the sight of him). It seems like James is the leading contender just because hes so central in the story, but thn you're always going back to Sy (again, from memory/long ago reading). I dont really like this story all that much, or Brooke, but I keep reading it cus I still need to know what happens. I dnt mean that as any offence towrds you, as it is a well written story, just not my cup of tea, really, especially when disliking the main character makes liking the story rather difficult. Anyway, I jst really hope James' heart DOESNT get broken, nor do I wnt him to screw stuff up w/Brooke, tho I'm inclined to think she will be the one to fuck up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! we're in 2010! update already! loll. love it. i dont like rachel though, so i hope they dont get all chummy and move on over the whole Sy thingo. I love Fanon and please dont break his heart. and what happened to Aaron and Ciaren and Dane and Jake and the other peeps? i liked Aaron, he seemed like a sweety xD please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFGOSH NO WAY! what. an. ass! omg i actually thought he was really sweet and caring and then he does THAT! what a shitty boyfriend -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fave books-hunger games, the sevenwaters series, cherub series, VA series, and more i know im gonna be pist that i forgot xD love the story! |