Reviews for The Apple
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
Quite interesting...I found this from frugale's recommendation, and she picked a good one. What a unique style...oh, and I did use the SAOM form. Hope you don't mind.
*ahh my tilde key is broken! gah* lyv
Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Hey, I found this as an "X-mas treat" on Frugale's site.
I really like this, it is such a great metaphor! I feel this way. I just wait to be chosen, I also fear rotting. Just amazing you put all of this in one short poem!
::claps:: YAY YAY YAY!
I will TRY to add it to my favorites, but all my spots are filled I am afraid.
frugale chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
EXCELLENT! PERFECT! Have I ever seen anything like this in my entire life ? I love it. Absolutely. Awesome rythm, subtle rhyming.
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 9/25/2002
Okay, i think its unique