|Reviews for Arashi|
| Trinity of Dreams chapter 11 . 9/1/2003
I'm loving it keep up the good work
| Inazuma no Megami chapter 11 . 9/1/2003
It took me so friggin long to read through from the beginning (but it might only be because I read slow V).
Anyway, cool story (do you know what the title means [other than being a band name]?).
Can't wait to read the next part .
| mistress shibi chapter 11 . 8/23/2003
I've been waiting for an update, but anyway just wanted to say agin how great your story is
| Green Envy chapter 11 . 8/21/2003
hm, it took a while, but u updated in the end. Great chappie! write more soon please!
| guest chapter 11 . 8/21/2003
continue with next chappie
| BlackBetty chapter 11 . 8/17/2003
ACK! WHO ATTACKED HIM? I loved it though...and sorry about your net connection...that has been happening to me b/c my town is just plain old stupid. Keep up the good work!
| Kageisuke chapter 10 . 8/15/2003
Chapter 10 : WHAT? Was that a BIG hint about the same event that happened two years ago that's been bashed into my head every chapter? Is he... HIM? ::falls on floor:: I don't understand... Bum bum bum... They find out Dakota did it... but Dakoto doesn't know what he's done... yet... ::cackles evilly::
Chapter 11 : ::grumbles:: I was just about to find out the other angle of this attack and who decides to nearly die on the floor? Isaac. Curse you... That was very dramatic, but it wasn't overly so... until the end... That was the part that went overboard.
Gah! I hate you... Hate you hate you... I really shouldn't get into stories unless their completed... This waiting thing is going to kill me...
Owari. Kage. If you don't update before my next chapter comes out, you're even slower than I am, and my chapters are 25-35 pages long!
| Kageisuke chapter 7 . 8/15/2003
Chapter 7 : Thye all brought weapons? ::sighs:: They were all ready for a damn war, weren't they? And, they know it's *her* now, right? Why was there such confusion in the first place? If she did so much damage, you'd think they'd all have to memerize her face. *And* why is she such a threat now? Do they think she's out to seduce Magnum members?
Chapter 8 : Oh, the drama! The suspense! The action! ::shudders:: I love great moment like those. And I wonder how pissed off as hell Magnums going to be when they found out Dakota interfered with this...
Chapter 9 : The anchormen was named Tom? -_- Don't tell me he's in his mid-thirties with brownhair and a beaming smile... Friday, a bodyguard? My god. The horror. Does her dad know the horrors he's unleased? Anyway, great chapter! I'll review the rest tomorrow, hopefully...
You have to e-mail me when you update. Unless you have your Author Alert on, I won't know unless I check the site...
Owari. Kage. Damn. Why can't my story be this good?
| Kageisuke chapter 4 . 8/15/2003
Chapter 4 : More flashbacks, and I'm starting to get the picture. I want to know who this Arashi is. I guess he was from Magnum and he fell in love with Makoto, from Blue Star, and that's why they aren't allowed relationships in Magnum. Now about Blue Star, I guess they have some new regulations, too...
Chapter 5 : Bros before Hoes? ::cracks up:: That's a mean saying, but it's funny... I get the strange feeling that Arashi guy is back.. You've been hinting... Hinting... Of course, I could be reading more into it that what you meant...
Chapter 6 : He says that a lot. 'It was nothing.' Whew, Dakota isn't too good a lying, no is he? M. I love your story. It's great seeing it from both angles, and each side makes sense. ou aren't as confused about their emotions like in some other stories. _
Owari. Kage. The shadow was cast over the Earth and everything was lost to the darkness.
| Kageisuke chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Chapter 1 : I liked that Chapter. I didn't know it was by you until I actually clicked on it. Anyway, great chapter. Spelling was correct [unlike mine], grammer was good [unlike mine], but I think you were pushing the normalcy part a bit, too much. I get the fact that they're supposed to be normal on the inside already...
Chapter 2 : This Friday guy is going to confuse me... I'm going to think you're talking about the day and not the guy... Hope it's clear when that comes up... Oh, Dakota is falling, falling ::fading voice:: falling... That was a good chapter. This is a real scary old lady...
Chapter 3 : So Dakota tried to deny it and it backfired on him. Sounds like normal. But those flashbacks at the end, I could make out the jist of it, but not make much sense of it in the timeline... I guess it'll make more sense later...
Owari. Kage. I guess I have another story to add to my favorites...
| Bishonen Chaser chapter 11 . 8/15/2003
WOW! all i can say is WOW! you are being way too hard on urself when u say that this was a bad chapter. granted things didn't move along as fast as they could have but still, sometimes you just have to have chaps that set things up! i enjoyed reading this chap as always! and i must give you props for that first part there with the triple homicide! wow i was on the edge of my chair! i mean wow that just popped out of the screen there at ya! i could clearly see and hear everything in my own mind and when you can get ur readers to do that then that means u just wrote one amazing piece of literature! it definetly felt real, u could just hear the anger and hatred and bitterness in the characters voices! it was so believeable i could so see that happening in real life! so yes, props for sarah! well i'm glad you had a great trip! and i hear ya about the internet! mine will do that randomly AND I HATE IT! so yeah i usually write or draw or something when i can't get on! lol oh yeah and while i was reading this i remembered something, there is this song (it's kinda a pop song...okay so it's mainly a pop song) but i like this song...and i'm not sure why, but i wouldn't tell you about this song unless i liked it enough to let other ppl listen to it but anyway, it's called "Hey Juliet" by LMNT and u know, since this story is like a version of Romeo and Juliet the song really fits! lol so check it out! i'm out
| Bishonen Chaser chapter 10 . 8/12/2003
awesome as always! again, so sorry it took me so long to review! gr...not gonna tell me who it is...*sigh* fine i'll just...wait...but like sanders patience is not always a strong point with me...so i guess that means that you have no choice but to have the next chapter out soon...i'd say b4 school starts next week...u have a few days to work on it! lol i think you can pull something together! haha well i am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! i am EXTREAMLY impatient to know how it all ends! oh and dakota and makoto have to kiss at some point..i'm just seeing that..yes...that was random but yes, it must happen! i'm out!
| Pikurusu chapter 10 . 8/7/2003
Wow. This is fantastico! You don't give yourself enough credit, your chapters are great and your writing is beautiful. I hope Arashi does come back.. he's so sweet. But, then again, I like Dakota too! ;;
It's okay that you don't update that often, each chapter makes up for it. I love your descriptions of the scenery and characters, it's really awesome. This story is definately on my favorite list and I'm using your lovely writing as an example for my own. (no stealing of course :D )
| foxdance chapter 10 . 8/3/2003
Oh my gosh, I finally stumble upon a great story and the author is away and won't update for weeks... *cries*
Hah, enough melodrama. You're a very talented writer, and your story just dragged me through an exceptionally drowsy all-night party (saved it on my PDA) and at the same time, made me not study for a major exam... Gah, it was worth it! :)
I hope you're back and planning to update. Please say yes.
| BlackBetty chapter 10 . 7/20/2003
I love your story! I really, really, really want to read more too! The whole conflict with Dakota and Makoto liking each other is wonderful (well how you set it up because it keeps on wanting me to have those two get together more and more!) And I hope you have gotten over the flu!