Reviews for As I Look Into Your Eyes
Raiment chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
This is a great poem. passionate from end to end. It allows me to feel what the author feels. great work. keep it up.
xo0Jayne0ox chapter 1 . 10/10/2002
This is a great poem My friend wrote a poem like this, and it reminds me of her so well.. (psst! Check out her stuff! She's on my fave authors list!) Not hinting or anything of course..

Thank you for reviewing my works, I hope to see more work from you in the future.

Regards,

-Jayne/x
rainypromise chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
Hey, that was great! I especially like the last two lines "so I bleed within my soul as I look into your eyes" I really like those sentence, it touched me somewhere. I write poems, to and I'm desperate for reviews..*hint hint* LOL thanks.
starsprinkles9604 chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
I've never really been in any kind of relationship with a guy, but I do know that Love isn't fair...truer words were never spoken. Sweet poem...depressing yet oozes feeling. It's for real...I like it.
GLow chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
i like how this is worded. very soulful like its coming from ur heart