|Reviews for Delaware|
| Johnny Afropuff chapter 1 . 10/22/2002
I have seen this happen many times where I live during the summer (in a cabin in the woods, along a stream). It is so true and so beautifully worded... I give you lots of praise for this one... it's going under my favorites.
| Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/24/2002
Imagery is. great.
discriptive passages start out as close-to-home, but move to left field, without the reader even noticing.
One thing to help- perhaps a bit more explanation of the pressure of history, that image didn't mesh as well as the others did.