|Reviews for Melville on the Dock|
| Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
oh man, thats so awesome. oh man! and, and, melville. acht. look:
a gold of conversations the older rhymes blinking
back the nova of
superceding the chain crosses-
genious. and, the lines, they are alternating between builded furling power of words, and then abate into simple conciseness, altogether that hits the on the mind like a strong blow. you write like a good fighter
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
oh melville and docks. Melville is like madness, to read, its madnss! Oh melville and docks and beards. madness!
| understated chapter 1 . 9/25/2002
good stuff. not the most popular topic to work with :). nice choice of words.