I had a feeling her and ryan wouldnt work out he was just too perfect and him and lily got together pretty fast. Lily was kind of to willing to tell people she didnt know very long about it but i liked melissa, rob, and melissas mom, they were really supportive of her . The story was different but still i enjoyed reading it. Good sad story. :)

This was the greatest story I have ever read. It was sad but had a great ending. Please continue writting fantastic stories.

i have never been on the edge of my seat by reading before!_ my mom told me that i needed to read more b/c i was always on the computer so my sis told me about this site and then gave me ur pen name and said to read ur stories b/c they are really good and they are ive never cried so much in my life ur a fantastic writer! i really enjoy ur stories and im not a big fan of reading!_

james? lol, english accent and all, haha. hm, maybe ill get jimmy to read this story now. it was really good, your a great writer.

NO! she broke up with Ryan !*sobz*

that's the end? sad! but it was a very good story and i will most likey keep on reading it over and over and over again! well done!

OMG! ok im sorry its taken me a while to finish reading this. I loved this story! you are very talented. Im so glad things worked out for lily. thanks for the review for five little words, im sorry i left you waiting so long. )

OMG i've been reading this story for about three months and it's great! i'm so glad u finished it! yay! now, pleez update More than meets the eye. pleez!

the end...! but why did they break up?/ u should have explaind it or something cuz they were the perfect couple./.

anyways,, the ending went kinda fast...it didnt talk about melissa, or rob, or hardly ryan...like there should have been more explanation...that could have been the longest chapter...but o well it was really good anyways..make another story like this! i will read it!

aww crap..nevermind...lol i didnt see other chapters left..

that was the end? i sure hope not! it sais completed in the summary now...im confused

omg this is so good! i'm really glad that lily has rob to be there for her and that ryan is so caring. pleez update this and more than meets the eye soon. if you want to, pleez r/r my stuff. great story!

awwe thats cute

this is a great story! im glad ryan's parents understand, but it's kinda freaky about lily's parents might do. by the way, i like the story without italics, but that's just my opinion. hope you update soon! can't wait for book four! please read my story.

awh i like this chapter. great story!