Reviews for Seething Evil
Paradise of Envy chapter 1 . 1/27/2003
Wow. You probably won't get this review, because it's been so long since you wrote.

I'd like t say: "I am the quiet ones..." MWHUAHAHAH! Erm...MLOS(momentary loss of sanity.)

I really like this poem. My fav. Much Luv -
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 10/13/2002
Awesome job. We talked about something similar to this in English class one day. Of course I wasn' talking all that much, heh. Awesome job

-Jessie
Cherrizzle Ice Cube chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
That was really good, but I'm just making some friendly

comments about what maybe you could improve on to make it a little

more descriptive and better.

FIRST- You could try to put in a charector name... Like who

ever was reading it. Or who the "bitches and

Bastards" were.

SECOND- You could use situations that happend to make

this person be this way (Past, Childhood, Parents,

Freinds, Relationships, Homework, Sports,

School)

THIRD- I think if you turned this Poem into a story a lot of

people would want to read about it.

Anyways those are just some thoughts use them if you want.

XOXO-Cherrizzle & Ice Cubes
Melted Crayons chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
lol. sorri, but that poem made my day. im quiet. and, i fit that. i have very evil thoughts sometimes. it also makes me wonder. theres this kid in my class who never talks, yet he stares at everyone all day long...

any way, like what u say. i cant write poetry, but u can. and, thats cool. keep it up.