|Reviews for unrequited|
| Amethyst Jackson chapter 1 . 9/27/2002
In response to Jupiter -
I made it all no-grammarish, not to mention one big run-on sentence, because I wanted it to seem very frantic and out of control.
Thanks for the review, and thanks to Black Rose as well.
| Black Rose4 chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
I like how it's written...I really think it makes you more into it and pay attention to what you wrote...good job!
| the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
See, you did a poem without any capitalization as well! I did mine without it because I wanted it to seem more "free-style" and stuff...yeah. Why did you?
I can relate to this poem so much that it frightens me. It feels like I wrote it myself.
Anyway, you've been spoiling me with so many reviews today, I'll get fat on all the sweets. :)
More poems, I loff them. Your style is lurrrvely. *grin*
Hey, the spiked apple juice finally wore off. You've probably already noticed, since this review is so very toned down compared to my other ones today. :)
Keep writing, peace ~~