This is an interesting story (but perhaps you should publish this under .net), rather humorous and thrilling in the action, but the sentence structure is rather brutish when describing some of the violence. You may consider adding a bit more lead-up, rather than directly heading into the violence. Some insight into Remo's thoughts and his emotions before doing other things would be preferable.
By the by, if you like action/humor stories, please read my God of Cookery. I think you might enjoy it.

sweet dude

Woah. Remo is a very dangerous man.

A job well done. I love a good shoot-out, even if the so-called "good guy" isn't shooting at all.

Indeed, a job very well done.

~DSL

I thoroughly enjoy your style of writing. Keep it up, and if you add more to this story, I know I'll be reading it.