beautiful story i think it was great the charaters and thank you for giving me a new favourite name. Lazarus, love it. i love all the charaters. continue on with your wrighting. thumbs up ]

LOVED. ABSOLUTELY LOVED.

This was really good! I'm hoping to see more from you _

I really do love your story. It is extremely well written, and you have created beautiful characters. The only fault lies with character development. When I'm reading, I don't feel like I know the characters. You should work on the development, and perhaps stretch the love story out a bit. This would be a wonderful story, and if it were a book, I would purchase it.

That was a really good story!

Firstly, I loved every single word in this entire story. All of it. It was right up my alley.

Second, I wish I had stumbled across it at it's creation years ago. I feel I'm a little behind the curve now. But this story is worth my full attention even years later.

The entire context was wonderful, and delightfully fresh. Reading it took up two hours of my free time, but I didn't regret a second of it.

I hope to see work of this caliber elsewhere in your profile. I'm betting I can see it well.

I completely fell in love with both of your characters, and hope to see them again. I wish I could have been involved in writing such as this, as I have a pechant for writing stories based on such things.

I think you would have written a great End of the World battle, and I almost wish you had. But this isn't the story for it, and I completely understand that.

This is one of the best stories on this site I have ever seen, and you should be proud to have created it.

~Jaide

One thing I found! Lazarus said there was no "battle" and that Lucifer left Heaven willingly, but Elishah says there was. Both were in the battle, so what is the truth?

Didn't seem cheesy at all. I liked the whole chapter. I think it was a sneaky and underhanded way for Lazarus to "lost face" so to speak, but Cahrenn IS a demon, after all.

Looking forward to chapter nine.

And a cliffhanger it was. I honestly can't see a way out of this for Lazarus and Artesia. I'm loving this story more and more with every chapter!

Well, next chapter.

Well, I expected them to make love, but I didn't expect it so soon. Not necessarily a bad thing, though it feels rushed.

I'm going to read the next chapter now. Here goes.

Lazarus got obliterated. Wow. Anyway, excellent chapter. I like how quick the Devil is to turn on his own. Very in character I think.

I can't wait to see what their next meeting is like.

Finished with this one. They were ruthless, I see, which I expected. God punished those angels who bred with humans with the great flood, according to legend, so I would expect no less.

Moving to the next chapter.

I don't think it was too overdramatic. It had a flair that I enjoyed immensely. I have to say that you have an excellent way of describing a scene without taking it overboard. I could just picture Lazarus crawling away from her, wings twitching.

On to the next chapter then.

Finished chapter two already. Outstanding. I like the interaction between Lazarus and Artesia. I also absolutely love her name. It's intriguing and fits an angel.

I look forward to the next chapter, and next meeting.

I love reading stories about the back and forth relationship between Angels and Demons, and this is EXACTLY the type I like best. I'm going to keep reading, probably all of the story. I'll try to review every chapter.

Lazarus rocks, and I like the way you described him. I can see him perfectly in my minds eye.