that was good and i believe that he son of the devil is called Damian

Wow, I just gotta say that this story was brilliant, and sure some people may flame but fiction is fiction, and you can make it however you want it to be. I think you did a wonderful job, and this idea was awesome.

I feel like crying. That was so beautiful. You are, all in all, a literary goddess, and that such amazing ideas and concepts could shed themselves from your mind puts me in awe of what you have achieved with this story. I hope to read more of your work, and I want to thank you for giving this gift to me today, it would probably be terribly bland without it.
Best of love
OzChild

just to insert a little something... you have an incredible concept and grasp of hell and heaven, but it really makes no sense to me that the angels would hate and detest in that particular way, seeing as that's exactly how the demons would act, hate is their way, love is the angels way... jsut wanted to say that, but I'll continue now.

I really like this story. I mean, I really do. I think that it's something everyone can relate to. Hard choices, I mean. I know some people are beyond biased and think, 'Why doesn't he just go with God?' when he first got the chance. But I understand. He felt devoted. But most of all betrayed. All I can say is that your character had a hell of a lot more guts than anyone I ever know probably will. Imagine the humiliation. But then again, I could only hope that I would make the same choice as he, and if had ever fallen into the situation, chosen the way he did. I applaud you. You're very talented.
'Til the ice is cream,
.::*Cimmeron*::.

This was a marvelous story. You did an excellent job with it. In fact I think you should publish it. You might make the part about his rehibilitation longer and add more descriptions to parts if you were to put it into a book. But this was a good story. It shows how there are shades of gray.

Oh my god this is the best story! I love the Angels and Deamons!

I like the names a ton too. . .

:D

Sequel?

I suggest you write more like it! Mostly on the same theme etc. It was great!

Sequels are good too...

OMG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! This is one of the best stories I have ever read! So realistic feelings and everything! I loved it! Beautiful, just beautiful.

Omg I love this so much. It's so hauntily beautiful. Wonderful.

wow...umm..how to say this... IT ROCKS!.. lol it was an awsome story. My friend suggested I read it..I wish i could write that good... ::Sigh:: oh well...good job!

-Jamie

Bravo bravo. And happy birthday :) Yayy for the beautiful story.

Aye me! Poor Artesia being held by Damian. I must read more. Now.

Wow lol. Sex! Hm this is really getting beautiful simply because I've seen the cliche of demons and angel couples, but you've fleshed all of it out so well. Reading more again now :)

Lovely darling. It seemed so gruesome the pain Lazarus was going through, which is what one would imagine Hell as. I'm truly moved by your words.