Reviews for The Sacred and the Profane
nextone chapter 4 . 3/26/2003
Poor Artesia, having all the angels hate her.. Le sigh. I'm going to read more now he. I'm really into it now.
nextone chapter 3 . 3/26/2003
Wow, this was a very intense scene and I loved how you described it. I'd like it if you aroused more of the senses though, because it seems that he says 'You feel so good.' But the feel isn't really described, or how she looks up close or anything like that. I'm reading more... it's getting very interesting now.
nextone chapter 2 . 3/26/2003
Hmm so it's going to be Lazarus and Artesia. Lovely :) Continuing reading this story now because I want to know what happens with the Anti-Christ.
nextone chapter 1 . 3/26/2003
I like this a lot. I've never really written from a demon's perspective (simply because I am not one.) But it's curious how you bring it to life. I want to see more and I'm going to read more, not to mention add this story to my favorites.
The Dragon Angel chapter 10 . 3/25/2003
it's really good, you got talent! I luved it all, sry i didn't review all the chapters but i read it all today.
December Morning Owl chapter 10 . 3/8/2003
I have to say I think this is a great peice of fiction. In romance wise, i think it has its moments but the way they just fall for each other is kinda rushed for my liking. What I really love about this story though, is how you portrayed the contrast between Demons and Angels and all the good vs evil concept. Anyway, i don't know if you'll keep posting on (I read your bio and understand ur contempt) but I'll check back to see if you've posted anything new. Good luck in writing!
Dan chapter 10 . 3/7/2003
You put a great ending on the story. Even though you didnt go into full detail about the battle, the reader could still picture what it was like. It was better the way you did it, rather then a full fledge battle
flameluvr chapter 10 . 3/5/2003
well, the end of a great work of fiction. I think that the ending was perfect, although I would have hoped for a few more chapters. In any case, its GREAT. Keep writing!
Ace Girl chapter 10 . 3/4/2003
Aw, crap. It's OVER? NOW what do I have to look forward to? ;_; This is pretty much the only story on. well, I guess it's FictionPress now. that I check(ed) regularly for updates. I love this kind of story. Wah. ;;_;; Good good good story. _ .Sequel? Prequel? Anything? Please? *mourns for the end of nifty story*
HaywireHakaze chapter 10 . 3/4/2003
*glomps Annie-chan* Oh, I loved it! When it comes to angels and demons falling in love, you wrote the book! *realizes the pun within, and laughs* No pun intended. . This was well-written, or at least I thought so. And. *throws confetti around* Happy birthday! Sorry the congrats was a day late, but better late than never, I always say!
HaywireHakaze chapter 5 . 3/3/2003
*clasps hands together* Wonderful! I can't read all of it right now, but mark my words, I'll be back! *evil grin*
Megan chapter 10 . 3/3/2003
Anne! Goodness, how long has this been spanned out with updates? Well, anyway. Feels weird not that it's over. What ever shall I read now? Anyway. I've been reading this since you've started and it's only gotten better and better! I love it. Hopefully you decide on that sequel! ~_. And again.. happy birthday! Nineteen year old punk. :P
Chris chapter 9 . 2/23/2003
if you arent putting Armageddon in this story, then y did u put Damien in it? it would be kind of cool to see a last all out war. like Damiens rise to power on earth and all that stuff. if u didnt intend to put armageddon, you should have never put the antichrist, because he has no role whatsoever, because he's only a secondary chacter. All the things he does could be done by other demons. So because hes in the story, you should at least say what happens, even if u dont make it a major part
flameluvr chapter 9 . 2/21/2003
YAY! a new chapter! this is a great chapter. i was sort of hoping that Lazarus wouldn't go over to God's side, but you know what you want for the story. again, its really good, so please hurry up and finish it!
Tamashii Hime chapter 9 . 2/18/2003
Oh, I'm really really looking forward to the next chapter. but I understand it's not always easy. get it out whenever you can.

It's good. keep it up :)
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