you HAVE to have an all out war between Heaven and hell. You already put the Antichrist in ur story, which is (i think) the ultimate factor in Armageddon. and one thing? Y is the devil happy that armageddon is coming? we read the book about armageddon in relige class, and the devil is himself tortured forever...o, and u also have to include the Beast (cuz there's the False Prophet-Antichrist or damien, then the devil, and the Beast-which i think is his master demon Asmodeus)

well, another awesome chapter, as usual. can't wait until the next one!

Your story is magnificent. I've had this idea for some time but I never had time to put it into a story. So you can imagine my surprise when I saw your story. All I want is for you to continue such a great story.

Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter! I just find one thing disturbing, aren't angels suppossed to be loving and forgiving no matter what? Especially to their own? Oh well, you are the author, and it is a wonderful story! Keep writing, the suspense is killing me! )

yay! a new chapter... its really good, but im still annoyed at the cliffhanger. oh well; just do your best not to let an emergency happen, kay? toodles!

I like this story very much. Please continue. I can't wait to read the next chapter. _

I like this story. So romantic. Please continue.

I like this story. So romantic. Please continue.

That was Beautiful. I hope to see more very soon. And no that didn't seem to hasty Lazarus had a good point for that.

This story is great. I really like it. Can't wait for more.

It's a very interesting and nice concept, and your writing is very well done. One question though: are you sure that Angels can hate? I remember a Christian friend telling me (after I said I hated someone) that they aren't s'posed to hate...is she wrong or right?

i love it! luv it luv it luv it luv it... its really good! i liked how you explained wounds only leave scars when the devil purposely inflicts them... and how the other dude, Cahrm something, attacked laz. anyways, i LOVE the ficcie so far, so keep writing it!

this is really good. i cant wait 4 the next update.

OMG! Fantastic! This story is just so amazing. I absolutely love reading it and look forward to checking each and every day to see if it's been updated. Wonderful job :)

Fantastic. More please.