Reviews for Teachers Pet
funky monkey gir chapter 1 . 12/4/2016
nice story
Baddy Abby chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
Update. Update. Update.
horsegril333 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I love it!

more please!
PadlockLOL chapter 3 . 4/4/2010
plz up date i want 2 find out wat happend next i want 2 know more plz update
PadlockLOL chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
this is 2 good plz update
PadlockLOL chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
why did she interupted them come on it was just getting 2 the good bit plz update i love ur story but i hate the father
i'm not dead yet chapter 3 . 1/13/2010
loved it
Leinelle chapter 3 . 12/24/2008
Uh...as much as I hate rape scenes...nice, but ugh!
Leinelle chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
Another point: When someone is speaking, don't let someone (ex: Mr Smith) be saying something and then it says 'She smiled'

Here's an example of what I mean:

"Really." Suddenly her smile became a frown again. "What?"

It makes it seem as if Kristin were taking in the scene. That's just one thing I've noticed!

O...I love this! Nicely done!
Leinelle chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
O! Hawt! lol

That was awesome. And I actually thought Kristin was the main character...but I expect her to be the b*tch who tries to get Adam, no?

Nice work, well played out. But when doing a scene as such, avoid jumbling the whole thing in one paragraph.

Good work!
BrokePerception chapter 3 . 12/20/2008
Poor Kandi... I would like to read more of this!
BrokePerception chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
GOOD DESCRIPTIONS.
BrokePerception chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
Good start.
That Person Behind You chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
I really like this story so far. You really need to add more soon, I want to know what happens.

~Liz
Words in Ink chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
o gods that is so hot. like seriously im getting so wet. i really wanted him to fuck her though. like on the desk. u should do that.
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