Reviews for Teachers Pet |
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![]() ![]() nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update. Update. Update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! more please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz up date i want 2 find out wat happend next i want 2 know more plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is 2 good plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() why did she interupted them come on it was just getting 2 the good bit plz update i love ur story but i hate the father |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh...as much as I hate rape scenes...nice, but ugh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another point: When someone is speaking, don't let someone (ex: Mr Smith) be saying something and then it says 'She smiled' Here's an example of what I mean: "Really." Suddenly her smile became a frown again. "What?" It makes it seem as if Kristin were taking in the scene. That's just one thing I've noticed! O...I love this! Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O! Hawt! lol That was awesome. And I actually thought Kristin was the main character...but I expect her to be the b*tch who tries to get Adam, no? Nice work, well played out. But when doing a scene as such, avoid jumbling the whole thing in one paragraph. Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Kandi... I would like to read more of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD DESCRIPTIONS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far. You really need to add more soon, I want to know what happens. ~Liz |
![]() ![]() ![]() o gods that is so hot. like seriously im getting so wet. i really wanted him to fuck her though. like on the desk. u should do that. |