like this...kute..update soon

heya, i love this story, i really wish there was more of it ~ Alenor.

hahahahaha this storys kinda funny. but i reckon alex and the dad are a bit overkill...and your chapters are too short. make them longer. D

Goodness, it's been a while, huh? hehehe I love how this story is coming along. The date sounds so sweet! XD Although.. more drama would be involved if they made a slight visit to the party. ;) Come on! It would be fun! :D But then those evil girls might want to "befriend" Melanie just to get to Jay. .x But yeah.. may good writings continue to you. ~Lilah

YOU! Hahaaha! It's been such a long time since I reviewed your stories ! I totally missed it! hahahah! Can't believe you're retired though, WHY? Anyway, you're still doin a great job both in writing and in grades! Merry Christmas! Hope to see you when school starts!

Hey there you crazy lass! Are you going to update soon? I hope so! Your stories are so good!

wo, great story. continue!

Hi, i'm sorry i havn't reviewed your story in a long while. I feel really bad... but anyway! great story so far! i really like it. P.S. how many more chapters? Update soon and e-mail me when you do at: thank you!

can u take constructive critisism? well, if u cant,then dont read the next part.

great plot, but the first ten chapters, sound kinda..well, unrealistic. cant happen. childish.

edit the chapters. add detail. add descriptions on the characters. better insight on the characters. get the characters more evoloved. make them real.

next, get someone to edit ur work. everyone makes these mistakes. but maybe a beta reader can give u some insight on what u have to improve on.

if u r just writing for fun, and dont want to improve, ignore these suggestions. if u want to be a serious writer, then take this advice seriously. u have great potential

u may want to rewrite the first few chapters...just a suggestion. keep on writing, u have great potential, as i already mentioned. the plot ideas r amazing. finish this story off, and update soon!

~anonymous is my name friend

I like it, you should continue...soon

when are you going to update? its been so long

Can I ask you a very simple quistion?

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?

I mean... your story is GREAT... and we've been waiting for ages.

So please update really soon.

best wishes,

shino_chan87

This is good! I like Melanie-intrestingly enough that's the name to one of my characters...-and I like Jay, even though he's being kinda weird at the moment. Keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I really really enjoyed your story! I I can't wait for Melanie and Jay to hook up! I think u should make both of them valedictorian...Update soon!

Updates are good things... I warn you... don't make Skitz wait too long... its not pretty. lol okay... update SOON!