Reviews for The Valedictorian
darkgurl92 chapter 27 . 11/26/2007
like this...kute..update soon
Alenor chapter 27 . 6/30/2006
heya, i love this story, i really wish there was more of it ~ Alenor.
CrystalDusk chapter 27 . 6/8/2005
hahahahaha this storys kinda funny. but i reckon alex and the dad are a bit overkill...and your chapters are too short. make them longer. D
Moni Jane chapter 27 . 1/23/2004
Goodness, it's been a while, huh? hehehe I love how this story is coming along. The date sounds so sweet! XD Although.. more drama would be involved if they made a slight visit to the party. ;) Come on! It would be fun! :D But then those evil girls might want to "befriend" Melanie just to get to Jay. .x But yeah.. may good writings continue to you. ~Lilah
no-kidding-whatever chapter 27 . 12/25/2003
YOU! Hahaaha! It's been such a long time since I reviewed your stories ! I totally missed it! hahahah! Can't believe you're retired though, WHY? Anyway, you're still doin a great job both in writing and in grades! Merry Christmas! Hope to see you when school starts!
fire-fem chapter 27 . 12/10/2003
Hey there you crazy lass! Are you going to update soon? I hope so! Your stories are so good!
Blueberri chapter 27 . 11/20/2003
wo, great story. continue!
Kittyangel1 chapter 27 . 11/20/2003
Hi, i'm sorry i havn't reviewed your story in a long while. I feel really bad... but anyway! great story so far! i really like it. P.S. how many more chapters? Update soon and e-mail me when you do at: thank you!
anonymous is my name chapter 27 . 8/30/2003
can u take constructive critisism? well, if u cant,then dont read the next part.

great plot, but the first ten chapters, sound kinda..well, unrealistic. cant happen. childish.

edit the chapters. add detail. add descriptions on the characters. better insight on the characters. get the characters more evoloved. make them real.

next, get someone to edit ur work. everyone makes these mistakes. but maybe a beta reader can give u some insight on what u have to improve on.

if u r just writing for fun, and dont want to improve, ignore these suggestions. if u want to be a serious writer, then take this advice seriously. u have great potential

u may want to rewrite the first few chapters...just a suggestion. keep on writing, u have great potential, as i already mentioned. the plot ideas r amazing. finish this story off, and update soon!

~anonymous is my name friend
Mannie chapter 27 . 8/25/2003
I like it, you should continue...soon
ren chapter 27 . 8/16/2003
when are you going to update? its been so long
DEADLY DEAD chapter 27 . 8/8/2003
Can I ask you a very simple quistion?


I mean... your story is GREAT... and we've been waiting for ages.

So please update really soon.

best wishes,

Secretive chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
This is good! I like Melanie-intrestingly enough that's the name to one of my characters...-and I like Jay, even though he's being kinda weird at the moment. Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
ItalianQT chapter 27 . 7/28/2003
I really really enjoyed your story! I I can't wait for Melanie and Jay to hook up! I think u should make both of them valedictorian...Update soon!
Weara Socker chapter 7 . 7/28/2003
Updates are good things... I warn you... don't make Skitz wait too long... its not pretty. lol okay... update SOON!
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