Reviews for lockjaw at cowpens
Mekare chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
Excellent poem, with absolutely stunning imagery. Made me think...
Kanon chapter 1 . 10/2/2002
Waaaai... loved it. :) Cool imagery, lovely judgement. Keep it up! .
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
Beautiful imagery in a nicely roundabout way. I really like it. It's like a bite-size morsel of launguage that is very easy to swollow, but sticks to your fingers so you don't forget about it (okay I dragged that one on for a litte while)

Anyway

the third to last stanza is a little incungruant with the rest of the poem. I feel like when you're talking about the actual plantation, you should keep the almost scientific detatchment that you had for most of the rest of it. Like the stanza before, where you combined both beautiful descriptions with that almost jargon-esque launguge.

as usual, nicely done,

-kirney