Liking Percival a lot.

OMG...this is too funny. Very accurate, too. I've played a few RPG games myself. (claps) Bravo!

Interesting start. Can't wait to go on._yin

MAN, YOUR STORY IS REALLY FUNNY ESPECIALLY WITH ALL YOUR CHARACTERS. I'm a RPG Freak too, I played all kinds of RPG except online RPG. I also wrote a story was also based on RPG too and BUNCHa animes too LOL. Anyhow your story really rocks, if you have the time, please read and review mine. My story, Rakuen, is based on FFT Advance with the battle rules and everything. Please write more of your stories. Oh, I also like your other stories too, they are really beautiful. That might be exgeratting but I think it is beautiful.

hi, sorry bout making your eyes all O_O with the Ryota/OC fic...anyway, like this concept of this fic. Well, gonna start reading this so bye! :)

Yes, it would be very weird and interesting to go into an RPG, wouldn't it? _ Very funny story so far!

COOL! I'm gonna laugh so much the next time I play an rpg! This is really hilarious... I love it! Hope you upload the next chap soon; please could you email me when you do so? great work!

Don't worry one lick my man. The comic edge is evident as much now as it ever was. I can't think if that's a good thing or a bad thing :b

It's good, i think, that Zenith is finally coming into his own in this chapter, if you can understand that at all. But he's now like the 'guru' of the group, and that's pretty neat.

This chapter seems to be different from others in that it's not trying to be intentionally funny, like others, but it manages to do it just by it's self.

Perhaps Hamilton did you good :)

Wishing you many (more) good reviews, Timmy

What are you saying man!Your edge is still there.I'm loving every minute of it up.

That's just great...I couldn't stop laughing. Dude, I LOVE this story. Of course, you're missing the mighty warrior chick with a heart of ice who falls for the hero...and the little creepy child with the disease/mortal injury that walks around talking about their 'friend' and gives away clues and stuff...

this wasn't as funny as some other chapters, but it's still good. _ can't wait for more.

Okay. so it's 12:03a.m. and i've spent 2hours and 55minutes reading your story..(i'm very bored) anyway..great story! i should have stopped a long time ago...but. your stuff's really funny! but there seems to be a lot of words missing or maybe you just used the wrong words...but something got me confused to where i had to reread a line a couple of times till understanding... keep the attachments coming!

A review! For you!

Not bad, not bad at all. Aside from a few errors, spelling errors that are.

Man, Percival is really starting to show his true colors in this chapter. Too bad for Zenith, though. I'd be angry too if someone I know had stolen my caramel cake. . .

Oh, Lulu's a temporary member? I guess that makes sense since you wouldn't want ugly characters as heroes, unless that was your intention.

Yep, Percival hero, and Zenith *don't know, um. . .* Well, Zenith's good for advancing the plot and comedy.

For some reason, this chapter seems a bit funnier than some of the previous chapters. Believe me, it's still funny! Especially Zenith.

Well, I can hope and wait for the next one. Don't give up writing, k?

Spell ya later!

This is incredible! RPG's are the best things ever...except I'd be more likely to do a regular Zelda-type parody, I play that dang game WAY too much...well, good story, I'll read the rest when I get time...good job.

Oh! I almost nearly forgot about this! Please forgive me! *nods repeatedly until my head hits the floor* Ow. . .

Great chapter, this is truly a great link to the next chapters. God bless on your finals.

Greave's coming back and someone gets a whooping! How the heck did Zenith know the enemy's plans in the game anyway? Was it pre-programmed already?

Can't wait for the next chapter, Zenith. And thanks for remembering me, indirectly that is.

Spell ya later!