this is a really good story!

I love the story i would like to see the sequel

I love the story i would like to see the sequel

An excellent story indeed. It is a little bit choppy though, and Claire seems to know too much of what other people are thinking.

However, you have a good sense of order in the plots of your stories and it was nice to see some one react in a believeble way to pain.

Great story! :) I loved it! Keep on writin so i can read more! Please?

You know there's a horror section around right? Not critisizing you, just reminding you, I've done that a couple of times as well. Put something in fantasy or novel when it belonged in horror, I actually got a lot more reveiws when I put it in horror. But this is a good story! Really it is!

great story, very well planned and written and i love the ending. i think a sequil would be good. whats her life like with xaith? is there any other vampires that want her? so many questons. great story.

I liked it 's one of the best stories I've

ever read.

more

I would just like to tell you that this is a very good story. The plot leaves me wanting and hoping for more. Please torment me no more and continue the story frequently. With all the nice skills I have, I praise you and your story.

Someone should kick Kale in the eye. :::Evil glare::: Yeah, he's a meanie.

this is the PSYCHO MIME, signing off for the last time_

Very well put together. I loved it. I will definitely come back to read more if there will be. Please, please continue! D

hey great first chapter it was really good. i just got into vamp stories so i find this really interesting i really hope you keep it up! i wanna know what happens damnit! lol anyway yeah plz keep going it was great!