Reviews for The Six
morrigaine chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
Your story has a lot of potential, but I personally would like to read a little more description. It's a good start although I have no idea where it is going (this is a good thing). I have one question. In one paragraph you make Aharya out to be all bad and rathful and the next one you compare her personality to a soft yellow. It seems a little inconsistant to me.
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