Reviews for il christantemi
kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
I like the breaks. Ironically, they make the poem flow. It's good, though somehow I think it might be better if it was

the sunlight on dusty leaves

wake

You know, without the up. so I feel petty now...
sweetspontaneous chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
this is a little like ts eliot. or maybe auden

beautiful, anyway. i like it a lot
unexpected source chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
a departure! Its magnificent in full form of it.

Its a departure, much like a lingering sock when you try and get it off, its stuck on the toes, and then its released and bare foot in the cool air! Well the style is the departure. The content is slower and sulky, a good sulky, the musicians sulkiness which is overbearing and slaughtering of the trite, you become a drone to music. Lifeless and full of life instantaneously and its livliness. Of course all of this is speculation, but it is what i find! A most fascinating find.

Lovely Lorraine, you become more talented Kazdi Chas

kai
marlena chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
ach-

it's hawthorne and autumn and chrysanthemums, men being hanged and weeping, ach so dark and rich, the deep color of a cello.

aside from that, i do love the format. it makes it feel like a whisper, it does.

wonderful