Great start! I can't wait for the next chapter!

yay! me like me like!

lol, I like the last line. But there's a time, but no date-a little weird? This is really good, though! I'd like to see more of it. I'd also like to see more marauders!(hint, hint)

Ooh, now the stroy heats up! I like this story alot. It would make a really good movie. And Ari, either you've died, or you've ignored us, or you are busy trying to get this Wolfgang stuff together, but... ITS ANNOYING! Anway, UPDATE. Ok? Thanks! Good story!

OOOOOH! Sounds like a good action packed stories. This sounds like it would make a good movie plot. Keep writing!

Woah...NICE...you have a true gift for original fiction. This is soooo good! Can't wait to see more of it!

Out of curiosity, are you going to continue "A Weekend and James'"? That was going really well!

Neat! This is really, really good.

Interesting, my dear. Quite interesting. When your movie makes the big time, be sure to tell me... I'd love to watch it.

Hey, just 'cause I'm going to be lazy, I'm going to review two of your stories here. Ariana one? Wonderful, am looking forward to the next chapter, you'd better get it out soon.

This one: it has a good start. I look forward to knowing more about Diane and Paul. She sounds quite interesting. Paul doesn't capture my interest as much- he seems a bit juvinile. I know, insulting your characters isn't a good thing. But the line where he said "My dad was a spy- a real life spy" made me think he was six or seven. Until you said he was nineteen...

I enjoy bugging you, can you tell? Just thought you might care to know, I am just being annoying.

Your adoring fan, Moonrose

VERY cool, Ari, very cool. I'd write more, but I need to get back to work now... hehehe. -jul

EEEEEEEEEE! Cool new series, Ari! I LOVE it! Keep going! I guess this'll be the new series now that the Ariana Black series is almost over... :( *cries* I like it ALOT!