Reviews for Journeys
Elfgirl2005 chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Beautiful work, your imagery is so strong and I love the concept. I'm not usually one for rhymes, but in this piece I think the rhyming helped the flow, not detracted from it. That takes talent, it's so easy to let the rhyme force the words. Well done!
Morbane chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
OOh - how cyclic. I love the image of the seagulls carrying leaves. It's a very light, simple poem, in a way, and I like it for that. Nice images.
Laurelin Firesong chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Wow. Where do you get this stuff?
Quilir chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
Very nice, I really like this one! Interesting concept you have!

This is a keeper!
Tanika chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
this is very very good. i like it alot. i like the repition in it. the vocabulary choice. the sensory imaging. you are very talented. keep up the good work.
Rizka chapter 1 . 12/20/2002
wow. what a stupendous circular poem...

~me
jUsTiN chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
Beautiful use of words and a captivating poem... Pretty and nice! Good Luck!
The-Grasshopper chapter 1 . 10/19/2002
Gave me a wonderful image in my head. I liked it a lot.
Zenith Azure chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
Very nice... a beautiful, big circle. Keep it up!
Toad-Frog chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
Wow this is one awesome piece. I would ask you to read mine but you would laugh. Your words flow nicely! I'm puting this one on my fav story list. Hope you don't mine! Keep writing!
Trunks on Toast chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
very nice and fluid. the continuity is perfect...you can just imagine this one little leaf going through all that. lol, and i like the whole "this is the song that never ends" aspect of it. good job!