Reviews for Wind of Hope
Mystik-chan chapter 1 . 9/24/2001
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. it's so sad too ;_;
Oracle chapter 1 . 7/21/2001
*wipes tears out of eyes* That is beautiful! And so so true!
Laurel chapter 1 . 6/29/2001
A lovely and touching piece, AND it has a plot. One word: Awsome!
Red Wings chapter 1 . 5/19/2001
Man, oh, man...that was utterly spectacular. That's an epic tale...wonderful writing technique...keep it up!
kitsch object chapter 1 . 5/18/2001
I always feel like an English teacher when I write reviews - anyhoo, this is absolutely brilliant. The best thing I've read in ages.
Kalki chapter 1 . 5/17/2001
Wow! The structure is amazing. The use of ryhmes is constant and doesn't overwhelm. Their is almost a plot, well thought out and filled with colorful details. The language is descriptive and leaves one feeling emotions and sadness for the losses. Overall this poem is almost perfect!
finite chapter 1 . 2/27/2001
This poem is almost an experience in itself. Very well communicated. (finite)
tabaqui chapter 1 . 2/24/2001
hmmm...i'd like to be able to describe this in words other than "beautiful". this is the first ballad-type poem i've ever seen on . great job.
Cairnsy chapter 1 . 2/19/2001
Naomi, this is utterly beautiful. A truly wonderful poem :)
Aderyn Du chapter 1 . 7/1/2000
Wow...that was GOOD! Sorry, I'm an idiot; I'm pathetic when I try

to say things like this, but...I liked it.