Wow, I really enjoy your writting style and diologue. _ Keep up the great work! Peace!

O.O Femme-slash! *glomptacklehugs* It's not corny, it's not cheesy, and you had better update soon!

I like this one. Any chance you could update a bit more often? Please?

Once again I love the description, but I didn't like how you changed the perspective. I think it should be one or the other.

I really like this scerario so far, and I really love how you described things.

aaw. short, sweet, kept my attention throughout for some reason i like it when she said 'soft'...
just avoid spelling errors... hehe, like clam instead of calm...
nice. reading more.
~ kal
(R&R back? )

this the first f/f story i ever read, but i really like it! all except for danny, who is the scum of the earth!
wait! i have a friend named danny...oh well. i'm sure he deserves that title as well, for something or other. update soon with 'the talk'!

Wow...I hope that's not the end! I wanna know what happens with Bay and Liss. It's a really interesting concept, having a pregnant girlfriend. I like this. There's the spelling errors like every other decent human being, lol, but other than that, it's good. I need to know what happens!

dang this is really good. keep up the good work. i want a second chapter. please. ttyl

I like it...alot..hopefully u'll update!

Really good!

You should keep going, please! And possibly with a *happy* ending(?)

P.S.-My name's Bailey and that scared the hell out of me at first. :)

Hey there!

This story was really good and awesome! I really liked it. You should keep up the really good work. Update soon! I can’t wait to read the next part.

~alex boi

This is pretty good, but after reading other people's fiction my standards are very high indeed. Fix up the spelling errors and it would be very good.

good angsty.u could have a little more description its a really cool story..can't wait to read more

i really like ur story i hope u continue on with it its one of the better storys i have read good job